Too many narrators. None of them were in first person either so it made narrator changes in the middle of a scene very odd and kind of pointless.
The story was slow moving at the start, a lot of unnecessary travelling. I liked the way the individual stories eventually connected. My favourites were Catherine and Tash, feisty women with their own minds in a very medieval misogynistic society.
I was curious how the smoke would be involved and the eventual reveal was interesting, I'd like to know where that goes. Oh and if demon smoke is illegal why is there a hand-sign in a book for it?
Also Ambrose annoyed me. He was whiny and pathetic, too willing to be the hero and selfish I'd say. The world building was magnificent though! So detailed and so much thought put into everything.
Stef Out x
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